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Видях,че има постнат един разказ на английски за това реших да ви покажа и моето отроче в тази област.Не казвам,че ми много добър английският,но се надявам тези,които го говоря да разберерат за какво говоря

Darkness had fall. Now everything that was bright and beautiful have fall in to the shadows of the night where only those who don’t fear the death dare walk. There in the mist, a figure of a man stood like a rock, looking for something. In his right hand he was holding a sword, which blade glittered from the moon light. His deep brown eyes stopped at something. Something there, where even the wizard of the North don’t walk, was moving, hiding from the destiny that was prepared or him. The man moved quickly like a fox preparing to attack his enemy but in this very moment ray of green light came from the sky and his could see anything except the shiny gold reflection. It ended as fast as it began and at first the man didn’t see anything different. Everything seemed to be normal as usual but yet he sensed that something was wrong. Someone was watching him, even though he couldn’t see him, he knew that the eyes of someone was fixed on him. Then from behind a figure of a man, dressed in black came out of the shadows and his eyes that were as black as the night looked at the warrior that was standing in front of him.
“So you dare walk in night?!”-the voice of the new man was cold like ice. He made a step forward but yet the one that have stood in front of him didn’t move, still believing that there is hope of him. But hope was death a long time ago, when the South and the East have fall in to the Shadow and when everything that once was made of light now was burn and only the ashes have remain to remember those who dear walk in the dark.
“I am Kalather, a knight from the West, and I do not fear you or anyone from your Order. The age of the wizard is gone along time ago and I will not stay and watch how the past will become once again present and how the future that have been already seen will be lost because of the dark arts.”- honorable words said the warrior but yet the might of the wizard was more powerful then any sword made from the hand of a mortal. But the courage of Kalather was legendary and even he could die in a fight, he will know that have died trying to save those who don’t dare walk in the dark.
“You are a young fool, I see the straight that runs in your veins but yet there isn’t a weapon made by a human that can kill me. You think that with your miserable sword you will finish me and stop the spreading of the Darkness. Ha, there isn’t such power yet.”-the tone of wizard was quite like he was trying not to be heard but yet his words were as powerful as a lightning.
Kalather was still standing were he was from the beginning. He knew that if he moved, the wizard will sense his weakness and use it against him. He knew enough about those, who knew how to use the Dark art, to understand the complication of the situation. He didn’t have choice, the end seemed so close but yet something inside his didn’t want to give up, even though for some the hope have died, for him hope was immortal.
The wizard in black lifted his hands like he was praying to the sky that was black as his robe. Dark clouds have began to appear when Kalather heard from behind horse’s hoofs. He turned and he saw a white horse that was beautiful like the moon ride at a gallop towards him. There was a lady on the horse, her blue eyes were fixed in the warrior and before he knew, she took him from the ground and they both ran somewhere in the forest. The wizard couldn’t do anything, there was a strong spell around the horse that even he couldn’t broke, some strange forces were working here. He knew that this wasn’t his last meeting with Kalather. He disappear somewhere in the darkness where no one dare walk.
The with horse was fast like the wind, soon they got out of the dark forest but the night wasn’t over yet, now there wasn’t nothing in front of them but the black sky and the dust ground on which once green grass was growing but now there was only rocks and ashes. The field ,which they were passing through, was empty like the hearts of men that were now bounded with the destiny of the Darkness. The night have gone but yet the dark grey clouds were on the sky and the Sun wasn’t able to be seen. Kalather didn’t speak a word the hole journey. His was too worried about the fate of the South and the East that were still lying in Darkness. There, where there was no day but eternal night and only the light of the candles were the source of light the prisons could get.
After a long day of riding, they stopped. The woman that was still a mistress to him get off the horse and with a single look Kalather understood that he should do the same thing. The woman had dark blue eyes like the ocean and his black hair was falling down to her waist.
“I am Meldonna, I serve Felona, the Queen of the stars. She told me to dare walk in the Darkness and I will found the answers for all of my questions, and yet I can not believe that you are this answer”-her voice that was soft, please Kalather ears. He didn’t know what to say. Many things have happened for such a short time that he didn’t have time to realize everything. Many questions were in his head and yet he didn’t have the answer to any of them.
“So...”-continued Maldonna, looking around the little forest they stopped in.”…you are the One that dare walk in the Darkness. Many people are speaking about you. You are a legend in some cities.”
“I am?!”-he was apparently surprised from this news. He was always have been from those that no one recognize in the crowed, from those who are always silent and don’t dare speak loud their opinion. He didn’t came here to become a hero, he have come to seek answers and so far he have failed. The only thing that he have done since his coming around the Darkness was to kill couple of trolls that were trying to still his food during the night. Nothing more then that. Was this such a big deal? So far he didn’t find the Darkness was scary as he have been told before to set of to this journey. Of course he haven’t met the black wizard yet. Now when he saw him he realized that his days will be much darker that they used to be.
The clouds became much more then they used to be. It was going to rain, the smell of it was allover the place. Maldonna looked for a place where they can hide but there wasn’t such anywhere around, just the deserted small forest with couple of trees that were like tiny sticks put in a line. This was a doomed forest, soon enough every single tree was going to be cut off, destroyed, erased from the face of this dark world where happiness have became a myth. They didn’t have a choice but to ride to Pel- the nearest city they can stay fro a while. Yet it was dangerous do ride in the night. The eyes of Him are always open for those who dare walk in the dark.
“I think we should go.”- said after a long silence Kalather. He knew that this was the only choice that have, Maldonna knew it as well but she didn’t want to risk everything but yet the rain was dangerous thing to play with. It wasn’t like the old times when everyone don’t make a big deal about it. But those are gone, now even the rains is full of the distasteful dark spells that can make you weak or put you asleep for a long time.
Maldonna agreed to go immediately. Both of them got on the horse and soon they were out of the forest, riding towards Pel-the city by the sea. Soon it began, first was just few of them, innocent rain drops but soon they turned in to а downpour.The cold water was hittin Maldonna in the fast and she couldn’t see anything. Everything in front of her was like bound in a mist. Kalather’s brown leather clothes were all wet and he could fell the water inside his shoes. They had like an hour more to ride but they felt like they weren’t going to make it. The rain was too strong, like a large rock that was like a wall, hiding everything that was on the other side of it. They weren’t able to see much far. Everything around them was like a big sea of shadows, like they were flying in a cloudy sky. And yet they could stop because they knew that this will be the end. Kalather was too ambitious to finish in an empty field killed by a dreadful rain. He was going to go as far as his straight can. He have never gave up, always searching for the truth, for the adventure but always hiding from the eyes of everyone, afraid that they will laughed in his face, because they wont understand. Their minds that are full ony with ideas for more money have made them blind about the real problems that were going around the world. That’s was one of the reasons why the South and the East had fall so easilly, that’s why now no one dare walk in dark, no one except him, Kalather, the one person who knew ,who believed that there is still hope for those who have no chance for a normal life, for those are now in the dark prison where only death was the salvation for them.


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Drjekil, имаш МНОГО талант с разказите (на всякакъв език)... Препоръчвам ти да не си пилееш времето с такива... "глезотии" (имам предвид много различни разкази), а да започнеш Книга! (колкото и нереално да звучи) Наистина, имаш мнооого талант, не го пропилявай така! Сега не съм чел този разказ, щото не разбирам мноо инглиша, но ти говоря за българските ти произведения!

Говорех сериозно за т'ва с книгата!

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...и нито един човек, демон или ангел няма да остане невредим...

Human_Paun4o написа:
Ne sam rasist,obijdate me! :x Az daje sam protiv rasizma,mangalite,negrite i drugite podobni jUvotni!

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Мат, книгата може да е и сборник! Иначе, Джекил, сори, ама нямам време за толкова дълги разкази! :cry:

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... Всъщност, за какво ми е подпис? Да редя мъдри слова, които само аз да разбера? Или простотии, с които да бъда запомнен? Не, за подпис ще оставя само това...


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Благораря много.Всъщност аз съм почнал книга.Фентази и съм почти завъшил първата част(трилогия е),а тези разкази просто бяха за отпускане(въпреки че криминалето не се оказе такова отпускане) и сега пак се връщам към фентазито ,ще постна Пролога и Епилога на книгата ми тук


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Браво! Браво! :D

Да се надяваме скоро да се появи на пазара! :P :wink:

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...и нито един човек, демон или ангел няма да остане невредим...

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Ne sam rasist,obijdate me! :x Az daje sam protiv rasizma,mangalite,negrite i drugite podobni jUvotni!

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