Ако ще го продължаваш, пиши на български.
Явно английския не ти е бил любим предмет.
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| Автор: | prince of jedy [ 15 Дек 2004 10:14 ] |
| Заглавие: | Prince of persia |
the adventures of prince CHARTER ONE A lond time ago in a days not like today there lived a prince a Farat and a vizier only they lived because all world has been turned to zombies.why ask you will.But my story does not start there,it starts an year before in a castele.The castele was a the castele of the prince.One day after trainging he heart a voise more of a skream.He pulled his swod swiftly and awaited for the inevedable to come.He went out the room only to find his father slain by the hand of someone who has not been there alone. -Gard-the prince said but none answeard -dam I don't have a saber strong enough to break this big rock preventing me to pass.I can't break stone with this sword.dam then the pricethen the prince jumped to his fther's corpse and took his sword.But then a Creacher made of black steal Came into the room. -death is inevedable you mortal fooool! _ who are you -Your king sumoned me but he was a fool not worthy enough. -no you are the fool now you shall die for what you have done.Both enemyes gaized upon each other's eyes.The creatcher throw a fire ball at the prince.The price avoided it.He jumped towards it and he stroke it,then because of an magic feeld that protected the beast he flew 10 metres back.It was verry dusty.the hero waited for the dust to come out.And then when he looked the beast it was still alive he did not even touched it.With one mighty blow the creatcher srtuck the prinse with all it's power it was a good thing that our hero had a magic sword. CHARTE TWO When the Prince opened his eyes his sword was split. -Where are going now mortal.hahahahahahahhaha -No we will not fight here we will meet again-continue the beast. and then the demaon disapered. He was playing with the prince.He wanted to him to die painfull and slow. -I know you are there.Come to me and fight -I will meat you later.Prince then the stone infront of the door disapered. -I have to find him-said the prince.Then he looked on the floor.and there laid a sword. Why was the prince asking himself. Then he prosided thought the door.There he see a solger. -Solger asist me comanded the prince. The solger lift his head to revail his head.It was clawed.then the solger started to rip his flesh and in a minet he was a mutant sombi. -Hahsharadah_said the zombie -I do not wish to fight you. then the zombie fold in two on the graund. his body started to enlarge and then it was 3 metres.it had spikes apeard from it's back. it stand up. -O no said the prince The zombie pulled it's sword and stroke the supraised prince. Our hero flew 2 metres from the hit to engage the wall and srike it and break a colum with his body.Then he rised from the dust.He was pained greatly...he was injured,but he stood up.The zombie attacked him.He avoided the hit and qikly jumped on it's back.He started stikeing with all his hatred.In a minet the zombie was turned to sand leaving dust in the room.Then the prince understud that these were not his solgers these were monsters.Mindless minions created only for one designation to kill. CHARTER 3 Prince survived the attack of the zombie.Oly bacause his armour.after the srike his armour was destroid.That attack nearly kiled and left him a great wound.He riped his clothing to tie round the wound.After he finished he heart a voise.A woman's voise.The prince qikly rised and and make a run for it becauce the bilding was collapseing.When ran the floor went dolw.He qikly jumped and grabed to a edge.He stod there.Then swiftly jumped from it to grab onther one.He continued this for 4 times.Then he jumped to a lever.That lever opened a door next to him swinged and jumped towars the door.Steped into the door to find a woman fighting a zombie this was a diferent one.It was smaller with it's clothings all riped.It hade huge claws that if killed with.The hero went to fight the zombie.but thena huge stone fall from the seeling.Like someone has been preventing him from his goal.He went around the the rock and there he saw a girl coming.She was armed with two swords.The price looked her .The zombie tried to attack her. She cut of it’s claws and suddenly with no mersy in her eyes she lifted the zombe in the air with the blades. -like this darling-Hhahahahahahaha -wait-shouted the prince. The woman stoped.-what who is there?-show your self!She commanded And Rayne spoted the prince.-Who are you onther vision. -No Stop-said our hero -You are real are you not? -yes -Who are you?- -Who are you?-he asked-I do not know,but we must stay together -I am not trysting anyone!So you can just go fing your old death that you seek!-and with this words she left. -What do you mean.-asked the prince -Don’t sweat it lover we will meat again.She said mean Charter 4 |
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| Автор: | Soulharvester [ 07 Яну 2005 09:55 ] |
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Аве ти ли си го съчини това?Първо има много грешки и правописни и по историята.Второ бащата на принца не умира преди да бъде превърнат в зомби от пясъците на времето.По добре не продължавай! |
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| Автор: | Ледник [ 07 Яну 2005 10:46 ] |
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Ако ще го продължаваш, пиши на български. Явно английския не ти е бил любим предмет.
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| Автор: | Existence [ 07 Яну 2005 18:00 ] |
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Ммм о не
Ето ти една хитрост... пиши на в уърд файл първо
Поправя ти грешките, това е мн подъл начин за щастие на мен почти не ми поправя такива... и пак не се опитвам да пиша на Енг, не е ли очевидно никой от форума не може да напише разказ на Енг, който да струва откъм лексика... |
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| Автор: | The_End [ 11 Яну 2005 17:36 ] |
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Eееееее, сега ако ми кажете и името на принца.... |
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